Feed back from peers

• The most common criticism was of the lip syncing, we agree with this and to address this we will reshoot a lot of the lip syncing parts.
• Another was that the camera was shaky while tracking Peter we also agree and this shot will be re filmed.
• Some clips are out of focus so to adress with again we will reshoot some shots.
• Peter not looking at the camera and to fix this again we need to reshoot more footage. 
• The narrative was confusing to some people, the decision about the narrative in the group is split and only one group brought up this criticism so me might replace the narrative if we can think on something better to replace it.
• Most people think that the effects used where effective but there was a split decision on whether the whole video should be in black and white or whether the video should stay how its is with a mixture of black and white and colour shots.